User:Merelyscience/Clonal deletion/Kmeehan0214 Peer Review

General info
(Merelyscience)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Merelyscience/Clonal deletion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Clonal deletion

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the Overview you have written is well worded and gives a good insight on what the article entails. Your introductory sentence is strong and concise but explains the basics of the article. It could definitely use some more indicators and details of what the rest of the article body sections will be about. This can allow readers to decide whether the article will be useful to them and whether or not to use the article. You have a good amount of quality sources and citations for the information you have provided so far.

It may be beneficial to copy and paste sections at a time to edit rather than rewriting the paragraphs completely.