User:Merelyscience/Clonal deletion/Poisonpearl Peer Review

General info
Merelyscience
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Merelyscience/Clonal_deletion?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Clonal deletion

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great topic to have for this semester assignment. I believe there is a lot of great content to build on and a lot of opportunities for growth and improvement that you could provide. Looking at your current edits, you are on the right track. The references that you have added are credible and provide detail to the content of the article. As far as your edits on the article itself, you have done a great job at updating it to reflect a better description and detail. I would continue to work through the different paragraphs a piece at a time so that you can continue to add to the article at a reasonable pace. Your work is looking great so far, and I am eager to read more! Great job!