User:Merinnazli/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

In class, we learned about Andy Schor with details and I felt better using this article about him since it can also help me to enhance my knowledge on him.It matters to me because not only he is an important role in American politics and a very important topic in our course syllabus; he works as an assistant director of state affairs for the Michigan Municipal League, being a State Senator has really impacted Lansing. He is the founding member of the Ingham County Land Bank, on the board of the Tri-County Office of Aging, and a member of South Lansing Community Development Association. I can tell he has great leadership skills and is very involved in his community by the article I read.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

In the article, the lead is not overly detailed. It is kept simple and brief. It is a general article about Andy Schor and talks about his works, hıs importance ın the community, and it is relevant to the topic (Andy Schor). I felt that his works were passed over and kept as a short paragraph in the article; it was underrepresented. Links were very successful and worked greatly; I learned more about South Lansing Community Development Association and Michigan Municipal League aside from Andy Schor. Article didn't have any grammatical errors,, It was perfectly fine. Article involves an image of Andy Schor. There could be more images of him involving in his community. It wasn't a part of WikiProjects.

Overall; article is well developed, grammatically correct, images were good but article needed more visual representation of his accomplishments and life, links were thoughtful too.