User:MerodioJJ/Mock Spanish/Simpson Hannah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) MerodioJJ


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the addition is strong and adds a lot to the page. I thought that adding what makes mock Spanish, mock Spanish was very interesting and helpful as a reader. I think that using the cite option in the header could be better than adding Crystal 2010 into the sentence.