User:Mervitan/Politics and technology/Alex K. Tran Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * Mervitan
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Politics and technology

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yes, the lead has been updated to reflect the new content that Mervi will be adding.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Mervi's start to the lead is informative and organized!
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Mervi's lead does not offer a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * It includes newfound information that is informative.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * The information is concise, but could be more organized with headers and subtitles.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes, the content added relevant to the topic.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes, the content added up-to-date.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * There is no content missing as all content is cited as well.
 * There is no content missing as all content is cited as well.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * The content that is added is neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No, there are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Viewpoints are fairly neutral.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No, content is netural.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * All sources are thorough
 * Are the sources current?
 * All are current
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * The links that I checked are good!

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Content is well-written and easy to read
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * No mistakes
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Should be organized with headings better

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * None.
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * None
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * None
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * None

For New Articles Only
''' If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above. '''


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The strengths of this content is that readers are introduced to a wide range of information.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Add titles and subheadings