User:Mervitan/Politics and technology/Brusso7 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing:Mervitan
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mervitan/sandbox

Lead evaluation
I think both the "Presence of Apps in the Political Sphere" and "Verified Voting" sections offer a great overview of what your talking about. The first sentence of both sections offers a clear topic but i believe you can make it a bit more concise. I think the lead for both your sections offers great information that is not too detailed to distract the reader.

Content evaluation
It is easy for me to see the correlation between the added sections and the topic as a whole. The information added is extremely relevant as I saw you used articles from 2019. By doing this it helps the reader understand that this is the most up to date information available. I think your sections focus entirely and the topic and I could not find any instances of going off subject. I may add more to your "Verified Voting" section if possible because I believe their is more to say.

Tone and balance evaluation
I was extremely impressed by your ability to only state facts. The ability to stay on subject while not putting your input made the article seem extremely professional. No biases were seen by me and I believe you balanced the information evenly.

Sources and references evaluation
All sources seemed relevant and up to date. Although I did not click on every link, the ones I did worked. The sources used did not seem sketchy and articles such as the one created by Forbes seem legit.

Organization evaluation
The paragraphs were extremely clear and flowed well. I think the addition of a richer vocabulary may enhance the paper as a whole. I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling issues as it seemed to have no mistakes. The sections are broken down well to improve the overall piece.

Images and media evaluation
No images used in additional paragraphs

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
I was extremely impressed with your work as a whole. By adding more to your section section I believe you will have a well-rounded addition to the article. Enhanced vocabulary may also make the piece seem more professional but I believe your on the right track. These additions definitely make the article better because the original article seems to be lacking information. The section about apps was definitely the strongest addition because it modernizes the article.

-Bradley Russo