User:Mervitan/Politics and technology/Maxack37 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing: User:Ishangill10
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Ishangill10/sandbox

Lead evaluation
The lead for the article is pretty solid. I believe it does a good job capturing the overall points of the passage. I would change the style of the writing though to fit more of the "Wikipedia" tone.

Content evaluation
The content of the article is fairly subjective. I would recommend reviewing the guidelines for Wikipedia-style writing and then trying to change the statements you make. Furthermore, there is only ONE source cited! I have no clue whether any statement you have made is true or not.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:

Tone and balance evaluation
The tone of the article is not neutral. Furthermore, since there is only one source cited, I cannot tell if any statements made are true.

Sources and references evaluation
There is only one source. Refer to other comments.

Organization evaluation
The organization of the article is fine. Please refer to other comments to fix the major errors of the article.

Images and media evaluation
Not applicable.

Overall evaluation
This article needs a lot of work for it to be usable. Only using one source is not acceptable and this must be changed so I can accurately tell if there is any truth to the statements written.