User:Mervt2/Misogynoir/Trjqdk Peer Review

Before I fill out the rubric I will list some of the changes that can be made to the existing article.

Under "Media" there are several paragraphs of examples of Misogynoir in pop culture. You can add some more examples from pop culture, especially ones that look at the topic from a new perspective.

Similarly, there is a "Music" section that alludes to the treatment of black women in hip-hop, however the section does not provide any specific examples through song lyrics or human studies. The claim is true, so there is an opportunity for you to find a reference that supports that claim and get an annotation for it!

Reference six under "References" doesn't have a link to another website, you may be able to find a digital version of the cited text and link it. Same with reference 19.

The lead is solid, the content is relevant, you might want to find pictures for the media section, that could be a good way to add citations and sentences. As is the article meets all the rubric requirements but there are things that you can do to add more.

General info

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