User:Meta02/Solana (blockchain platform)/Yuhcool Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meta02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Meta02/Solana_%28blockchain_platform%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Solana (blockchain platform)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: I think the lead section definitely has potential to be revised after you finish adding your subsections. The articles current lead section contains a short explanation of Solana, but lacks additional context about the rest of the article's major sections.

Content: I was slightly confused on the idea of smart contracts, I wasn't sure what relevance they had to Solana (I'm assuming Solana's business has to do with them somehow). I'm not sure if it's necessary to explain the connection more, or if the article's tone is expecting readers to already be familiar with blockchain technology.

Tone: I think the overall tone of the added section is good, maintaining neutrality while still being informational. However, I think some areas could be revised to fit the overall article better. For example, the third paragraph begins with "In today's fast paced, data driven world, smart contracts will only really be efficient..." which does not seem to be necessary to explain smart contracts. I would revise this to just explain that organizations require efficient smart contracts, which can be achieved through Solano because... Another part I would revise is the first sentence of the fourth paragraph, which states "Solana (as many other blockchains), is extremely safe and reliable." I think this sentence drops the neutral tone and adds some of the author's own opinions in. It might be better to write that Solano claims to be safer than other forms of transactions due to ________ and cite a source where Solano explains their safety features.

Depending on the depth needed to fully explain smart contracts, it might be worth creating a separate article to explain them, linking to that in Solano. Overall, I think the added section does a lot for the article as a whole, as it seemed mostly incomplete without the additional information explaining how the platform works and its relevance to smart contracts. If applicable, I would also consider adding any images that are relevant to smart contracts and blockchain that may help readers understand the concept of Solana and smart contracts.