User:Metrobooomin/sandbox

We propose to add the following content into the Melanoma section: UV nail lamps, which are used in nail salons to dry nail polish, are another common and widespread source of UV radiation that could be avoided. Although the risk of developing skin cancer through UV nail lamp use is low, it is still recommended to wear fingerless gloves and/or apply SPF 30 or greater sunscreen to the hands before using a UV nail lamp.

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Thanks for your suggestion. I have a few notes: Good work so far! JenOttawa (talk) 03:21, 6 November 2018 (UTC) Thank you for the feedback. I have changed the sentence to remove the time reference.
 * I made an adjustment to your first use of citation 1 and 2. Please make sure that your citations are consistently placed in the text. They go immediately after the punctuation like this.1
 * Can you try to add some Wikilinks (note: we just link the term the first time it is used in the Wikipedia article). Has UV been defined earlier in the article? If not, define and add a wikilink, for example.
 * Avoid time references in Wikipedia as per https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Words_to_watch#Relative_time_references. I suggest changing this sentence to "The risk of developing..."