User:Mevanko/Self-care/Evc32 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Self-care


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mevanko/Self-care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Self-care

Evaluate the drafted changes
A) language is codified, for an academic audience - consider briefly explaining the language as you use it instead of simply quoting and linking niche concepts - capitalism, activism, beauty standards etc. — to the respective Wikipedia articles.

B) sources are one sided, can be met with criticism by readers on Wikipedia - consider including other sources or acknowledge different point of views.

C) consider including more examples to support the main point