User:Mevanko/Self-care/Mgoyena Peer Review

Lead


 * "Despite the name, self-care is not a solo activity as the community overall plays a large role in access to..."
 * Define community?
 * "Concept of self care has received increased attention in recent years"
 * source?
 * "Routine self-care is important for generally healthy people but self-care becomes essential when illness occurs."
 * source?
 * generally healthy people is a subjective term, what kind of illness
 * could be an opportunity to connect to non-normative spaces of health that we have discussed in class

Self-Care in Times of Illness


 * Expand definition of chronic illness and maybe re-examine the examples - are these the most relevant examples, how do they connect?
 * An acute illness like an infection (e.g., COVID) requires the same types of self-care behaviors required of people with a chronic illness, but the medication adherence and symptom monitoring behaviors associated with an acute illness are typically short lived.
 * source?
 * maybe link out some definitions like medication adherence and symptom monitoring
 * overall, this section may need some more citations linked clearly within the paragraph

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)