User:Mevm21/sandbox

Mevm21 Peer Review

The additional information that your adding about Yosimar is great and I understand how you want to input the missing pieces about his life on to the Wikipedia page. I have a few questions about how you are going to layout the information you have. Are you going to be adding your own sub heading to the page? How in depth are you going to go in about La Maricolectiva? Putting more about his many different works are great too because it shouldn't go unrecognized. Overall great work on the resoureces and pulling out information. -Latoya Townsend

Thank you Latoya for your review. I just saw this, didn't realize it was a peer review. However, I could still answer your questions. The information was added in different sections of his page, we did not create a new sub heading. It is difficult to find articles that are not bias or are not interviews since Yosimar is still alive, however, we managed to find some and were able to add information that helped queer his page. Unfortunately, for La Maricolectiva, we were unable to find an article that talked about it in depth. Even after class I hope to continue working on his page. -Maria

"Article Evaluation" Twenty one pilots: Everything in the article is relevant. Something that might be added is other current interviews that have been done, the CD signing held in L.A. All information is up to date. The article is neutral. Yes, the article is supported by Alternative Press and RockSound which are magazines that held interviews with the band. In the wiki-talk they mostly talk about what needs to be added and how to go about that. There is a few arguments here and there about people not referencing correctly or not having strong references.

"Article Evaluation" (in-class) Andi Mack: Everything in the article seems to be relevant, but what is distracting is that the article lacks information on different sections. There is information missing, the section where it has season 3 is missing more information. Adding more information and adding more details about the characters can be improved. I believe for the most part the article is neutral and does not seem to be heavily biased. I believe this article barely focuses on queer, therefore, is underrepresented in that aspect. The links of the citations work and support the claims the article is making. The sources are reliable, because some claims come from the direct Disney Channel bio page and news articles that talk about the show. Behind the scenes they are talking about the theme song of the show and they also talk about Cyrus Goodman the character who identifies as gay in the show. This topic differs from the way we've talked about in class because it does not talk more about queer characters.

List of potential topics: Gloria Anzaldua, Yosimar Reyes and Chavela Vargas.

"Article Evaluation" Yosimar Reyes: Yosimar's page is still a work in progress and lacked many edits that represented his queerness. The materials listed on his page are relevant to him, but it seems like they do not go in depth. For instance, they talk about Prieto his poem and solo show, but the title of his solo show is not just Prieto, rather it is called Prieto: Growing Up Queer and Undocumented. So it's small edits like that, that are needed because it is part of his identity. The resources available are reliable, however, there are some that are outdated or can't be found, such as, the source for La Maricolectiva. The page overall seems unbiased and relevant, however, more information is needed.

Bibliography: (Vice): Emphasizes that Yosimar identifies as Queer and talks about his solo show 'Prieto' which will be used as a second source when talking about it. (Into More): Goes more in depth on Yosimar's solo show, Prieto, such as, how and why the show was created. (Harvard University Article): Talks about the themes Yosimar explores in his work. It also states where he has been mentioned and for what, such as, he was mentioned in the article The Advocate as one of the LGBT Latino who is changing the world. Will also count as a reference for what La Maricolectiva does. (No references are on it). (Okland Post): Mentions Yosimar's performance in the 2017 Brand New Voices: Queeriosity.