User:Mewallac/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Neurodiversity

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It was given a C rating, and it was one of the articles that popped up when I was searching for autism related articles.

Evaluate the article
This article provides a decent idea of what neurodiversity is, but it is not without its issues. There are some sentences that do not have a source. The warning up at the top of the article says that some of the work may be speculation, but I don't think that is necessarily the case. The sentences that don't have sources just need to either be removed or have a creditable source to support the claims that they are making. There was one section of the article titled "Double Empathy" that just seemed really out of place. The article went from talking about what neurodiversity is and its history straight into the section titled "Double Empathy". There were sections after that didn't seem to fit with the theme of neurodiversity until I finally realized the article was referencing ways that neurodiversity appears in society. That could have been made much clearer to avoid confusion and make the article flow better. I do think that this is important information to include, but it should've been gone about in a different manner.