User:Mfajardo2/Questioning (sexuality and gender)/Guadgamero Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mfajardo2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mfajardo2/Questioning (sexuality and gender)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Questioning (sexuality and gender)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the sections explaining the study (others, exposure, and assessment) have a bit too much quoted content that could be changed to your own words. The description of those categories at least.

Maybe combining another study/source to show women questioning sexuality? Combining the one big study with more could make for a strong addition to women experiencing questioning.