User:Mgferris13/National Treasure: Book of Secrets/FloatingLarGibbon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mgferris13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * National Treasure: Book of Secrets/Sandbox
 * Editing User:Mgferris13/National Treasure: Book of Secrets - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * National Treasure: Book of Secrets
 * National Treasure: Book of Secrets - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead has not been updated, but the original article has a fairly decent lead as it is.

There was content added of where to watch the movie. I believe that would be helpful to anyone who wants to see it.

There are a few instances where the source for what is written is unclear.

No images have been added yet, but I suggest they add some pictures of scenes in the movie itself, as the original article already has pictures of production and the movie cover.

Over all, it is a good start. The first section is a tad choppy where the film critic information is added. The article chosen to edit already has a lot of information in it, so they are doing well finding more.