User:Mgibaszek/Pine Ridge Reign of Terror/Grasyn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mgibaszek


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgibaszek/Pine_Ridge_Reign_of_Terror?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
I think the information you have here is good, it just needs to be expanded a bit more.

The lead is mostly about Dick Wilson, but I think the lead should be more about the specific events that happened at the reservation. Dick Wilson seems important, so give a little more information about who he was before he was elected tribal chairman of the reservation. I see you have a section set up for Dick Wilson's history -- that was going to be my next suggestion.

Content
I think the information you have throughout the article is very good. You have good subheadings that would be good for expanding on the information you already have, it's just a matter getting that new information in there. I think it would be cool to include information about what the reservation is like today. You could see if Native Americans are still living on the reservation, and also if the government is doing anything to rectify the massacre that happened.

Tone and Balance
I think the tone of your article is very neutral, which is good.

Sources and References
The references you've added so far seem to be from good sources. Make sure you have a reference link every time you include information from a new source, but you're on the right track.

Organization
I think your article so far is concise and easy to read. Some of the information is written in present tense, and I think that the article would read a bit better if it was all in past tense, for the sake of uniformity. Other than that, I didn't notice any grammatical issues.

Overall
I think your article is headed in a good direction. Once you flesh out all the information you've added, I think you will have a well-written, informative article. Good job so far!