User:Mgn23/Diana Yesenia Alvarado/Mgn23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gagik


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgn23/Diana_Yesenia_Alvarado?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgn23/Diana_Yesenia_Alvarado?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead: the lead is clear and concise and is not overly detailed.
 * Content: The content is relevant to the topic. This topic deals with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps and provides information about a Chicana artist, a historically underrepresented group.
 * Tone: It's overall tone is neutral
 * Sources: The sources are listed three different times, I think it is best to just list them under one References heading
 * Organization: The content is well organized
 * Images: N/A