User:Mgn23/Marcelina Gonzales/UCLA PH Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mgn23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgn23/Marcelina_Gonzales?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you should add some wikilcnks to your article to make it look better, like for certain terms that need to be defined, or college/universities, and etc. And also your page looks more like essay paragraphs, consider changing up the way you present things. Also go over it because I think there were some grammatical errors. Also go over your references because I noticed the personal website of the artist and some other *unreliable* sources(according to the guidelines). You could put the personal website and things like that in the external links section. And lastly, make the "Notable Works" a heading.