User:Mgoyena/Bodymind/Ekf22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Mgoyena/Bodymind


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgoyena/Bodymind?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bodymind

- just make sure to unbold the entire section when you post :)

- See Also part is good!

- Content seems neutral and backed up by reliable sources

- Lead has been updated to fit the new content

- I think your sources 5,6, and 7 are the same and can be just quoted multiple times as source 5

- same for sources 3 and 4 look to be the same source and can just be quoted as 3 multiple times (hope this makes sense! if im misunderstanding just ignore)

- the article seems to meet the notability requirements, it has the same pattern as wiki articles, has a lot of sources

- definitely specific to disability studies

- can you add any links into your new text? like can you link bodymind or the names or the book to a wikipedia page?

- i feel like this could also work if you put it under the disability studies section of bodymind because it is very specific and excludes other info about bodymind (religious, philosophical)