User:Mgoyena/Bodymind/Evc32 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bodymind


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgoyena/Bodymind?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bodymind

Evaluate the drafted changes
A) language is codified, for an academic audience - consider briefly explaining the language as you use it instead of simply quoting and linking niche concepts — ableism, epistemology etc. — to the respective Wikipedia articles.

B) sources are one sided, can be met with criticism by readers on Wikipedia - consider including other sources or acknowledge different point of views.