User:Mgr015/Lankanectes pera/Bap027 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mgr015


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgr015/Lankanectes_pera?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lankanectes pera
 * Lankanectes pera

Evaluate the drafted changes
After looking at the sandbox draft and comparing it to the wikipedia article, it does not look like there is much (if any) information that is different between the two. However, this could very likely be due to the fact that the changes were already added to the wikipedia article. The lead does seem to include a brief mention/description of the articles major sections. The content is neutral and unbiased, and the sources seem to support the same topics that are mentioned in the article. I think the biggest source of improvement for this article could be from simply making full sentences, rather than shorter, cut off sentences that seem more like notes that are being jotted down. Adding a few more headers and an image of a map could also be beneficial, however, this is a good start and there is a wealth of information for the description of the Lankanectes Pera that is very informative.