User:Mgr015/Lankanectes pera/Rgodek518 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

username: Mgr015/Lankanectes pera


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mgr015/Lankanectes_pera?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lankanectes pera

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

- The lead is brief, but that is completely expected as the editing process has only just begun. With time, as the lead becomes more developed, I hope that it is fleshed out a little more, but it looks like there is a good start so far. I would look to include general information about where the frog can be found, its diet, and its general appearance.

Content:

- I thought thought that the content was informative and well written, but brief. As the article is written a little more completely, I'd be sure to add sections about its diet, mating habits, conservation efforts for the species, etc.

Tone & Balance:

- The content of the article is unbiased and fact based, which looks great.

Sources & References:

- The article references several different sources, all of which come from scientific journals. The reference section looks great.

Organization:

- The article is clearly organized under headers that clearly denote their topic. As more subtopics are added, I'd be sure to maintain this organization.

Images & Media:

- This page doesn't yet have any pictures of the species, but those will be easy to find and reference and the article is developed a little further.

Overall Impressions:

- I think that the article is off to a great start, it could just stand to be filled out further with more information about the species. Otherwise, I think it looks great.