User:Mguzman09/Political Communication/Mguzman09 Peer Review

Hi Alana (Aglendrange), I want to first thank you for providing such great insight to my Wikipedia page and the articles I was able to find. I am excited about what I am going to be able to add to the article to make it better. I like the suggestion that you have about reading smaller passages and making them your own I believe that really will be helpful. I have been having a really hard time figuring out how to properly add more content to the Wikipedia page. I know that I will be able to add information that is going to be valuable to the article. I agree with you regarding those two sections that I will look for some additional information or even remove since it is a little confusing. Your article is really interesting to discuss especially when we think about how social media is utilized today and how we optimize the utilization of it. I really do like your addition of what the goal of social media optimization because I do feel like the article needs more information regarding what it is and what the goal is. One of the things that we have been discussing in class and would like to see if you can talk about it in the article is about privacy concerns because it could add some depth to it regarding how concerns of privacy within social media optimization. The tone of the information that you are providing continues to stay neutral which is important within Wikipedia so keep that up when you continue to add any additional information. The items you are adding are simple but key to continuing to evolve the way this Wikipedia page is developed. I am excited to see what else you are able to add to the article. Marc