User:Mhenderson20/Ronald S. Burt/MBALead Peer Review

General info
Mhenderson20
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Ronald Stuart Burt
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ronald Stuart Burt

Evaluate the drafted changes
After looking over your article as well as your bibliography with your planned edits, I am very impressed with the work that you have put into this. The lead for this article is great in my opinion and covers just the right amount of information! I do have a few concerns as well as some suggestions. The article seems to be lacking a lot of information, and I think that instead of a "bibliography" section, there should be a "Education" section and a "Early Life" or "Personal Life" section so that when people come to the page to find information about him it's easier to find. The information that is in the article is great, and once you add your proposed changes it will be even better. Something I recommend is adding a picture of him, and adding as much information and references as you can. You are doing a great job so far, and I can't wait to see the article after you are done making your edits.