User:Miaarosee/Specific phobia/KMayberry Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Miaarosee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Miaarosee/Specific_phobia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Specific phobia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

What looked good/what to keep


 * Number of sources
 * Layout/flow
 * Introduction/lead section

To potentially fix:


 * More info to epidemiology section