User:Miahutchinson1233333/Individualistic culture/Earmand420 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Miahutchinson1233333


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Individualistic culture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Miahutchinson1233333/Individualistic_culture?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the original article and comparing it to the drafted article, I believe the author did an excellent job of adding to the article. Specifically, the lead draft is most impressive because compared to the original the draft is more descriptive when discussing the definition of individualistic culture. Both additional sections do a great job of being descriptive and reflecting the cited sources. The organization of the drafted article is exceptional. My only critique would be of the citations. Some of them lack the date of publishing, but other than that it’s great