User:Miajgoldberg/Deaf Culture - Deaf Bing/Madelynrogers Peer Review

Peer review
I enjoyed reading your article! I found everything really interesting!

I would put everything in the 3rd person, that way nothing will be biased.

Maybe elaborate a little more on "Sports hand grabbing". I assume you're talking about sports players, this could just be a little more clear.

For "hand grabbing", I really like the police officer example. Maybe elaborate on this? You could add why this is so essential and explain that Deaf people often don't have the ability to communicate in situations like these. Maybe that's getting a little too deep but I think it would maybe be worth it?

For "Stay Deaf" I think you could add more here too. Maybe explain why most people choose not to use a hearing device. Hearing people are stupid, and a lot of them don't understand this at all. :D

For "Long goodbye's", again I just think some more explanation would be great here. Like, why they take a long time, why this is a mark of Deaf culture, etc.

And for adding citations- when you click on "Cite", there is a "Re-Use" button, so you can make a list of references if you are citing that reference more than once. I found this really helpful when doing mine! This way your citation list will be a bit shorter. :) Overall great job! Excited to see how it turns out! :)