User:Miamiheat12/Jewish Autonomism/Bane117 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Miamiheat12)


 * User:Miamiheat12/Jewish Autonomism - Wikipedia
 * Jewish Autonomism - Wikipedia
 * Jewish Autonomism - Wikipedia

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I enjoyed reading your article, and appreciated how organized it was when speaking about the movement in different regions. However, I do believe that you are missing some key figures during the movement. Your did mention Simon Dubnow however, I believe you should've gave a short description of who he is, and his background.