User:Miawach/PeerReviewResponses

Response to Matin:

Thank you for your thoughtful response! I will reword the mission statements for the orgs I included like Shuvayatra in order to provide more clarity. I agree with your point about Twitter, and will look into specific tools that were used during the Fukushima disaster to make that point more cohesive. I also saw the minor grammatical mistakes after rereading, and will make those revisions. I'll also make sure to remove the parentheses in the places you mentioned, and replace the biased wording. This review was extremely helpful, and I completely agree with the points you've made. Thank you so much for your help, Matin!

Response to Cadence:

Thank you for your valuable review! I will be sure to create an introductory sentence in order for the paragraph about citizen-led initiatives to be less abrupt. I also agree that my writing in that sentence comes off a little biased, and will adjust that sentence accordingly. This is extremely helpful, thank you again!

Response to Jeffrie:

Thank you for your helpful review! I agree that I tend to sound a little biased when using phrases like "the importance of" and "a much more easily navigated," as it can guide readers to make conclusions. I will be sure to reword those sections so that readers can make their own opinions based upon the article. Again, thank you so much!