User:Mic-233/Fathom Five National Marine Park/LSW0501 Peer Review

It contains all five contents that need to be included.

1. Species information

2. Reasons for the creation of protected areas

3. Information on First Nations

4. Impact of climate change

5. Introducing Dangerous Species

Especially, it was best to emphasize the SARA separately.

It's about faithfulness to the title, but it was so much about the species that I wanted to add more about the topography and history.

It is easy to understand because the writing is helpful, neutral, and the sentence structure is neat.

However, it would be better to divide subsections by adding titles to each paragraph.

Overall, it is a good content, but I think it would be better to add a little more information.