User:Michael Cheng2/Mithridatic Wars/Moonman15 Peer Review

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Michael Cheng2
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 * User:Michael Cheng2/Mithridatic Wars
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 * Mithridatic Wars

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

The Materials added are great additions to this article providing the viewer with a very detailed account of the three wars that took place during the Mithridatic Wars. It still leaves the viewer to still go explore the article regarding the particular war they are interested in without taking out that necessity of that article.

The content does appear to be up to date using a blend of old and new sources about this topic. Some things that may be missing from this article are links to other articles that viewer may be interested in such as “Mithridates” or locations mentioned in the article.

Tone:

The tone of this article remains neutral. The current draft does lean more towards the historical events and does not have anything on the classical references like seen in the unedited article.

Sources:

The sources for this article are a blend of classical and more modern sources with a well-balanced usage between two types of sources. It does seem to rely heavily on one classical source due to the others seeming to have only brief descriptions of these wars.

Information given does align with the sources used.

Organization

The main body is clearly organized into sections that can be used for quick reference.

One issue seen is the usage of “He” in certain places like at the beginning of a sentence which could lead the viewer to be uncertain about who is being referred to in that particular instance it should only use the names people only for sake of clarity.