User:Michael Henderson Burt/Sexual slavery/Mervt2 Peer Review

Lead
The lead includes an introductory sentence that defines and describes the articles topic in detail. The lead does include a table of contents that shows the articles major sections as well as subsections. All information in the beginning of the article is also present later in more detail. The introduction is concise but could also use a bit more of an outline of what is available later in the article.

Content
All content provided is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. Some sources could be more up-to-date, but information surrounding this topic is updated as often in certain countries. This article also address topics related to historically underrepresented populations by including subsections on where sexual slavery has occurred even in smaller countries that are not heard of.

Tone and Balance
The content in this article is neutral, and does not seem to be opinionated. No claims seem biased at all. Some sections are overrepresented but that could be due to a lack of credible information offered on smaller countries in continents represented. This article does not present any persuading information, all words provided are informative.

Sources and References
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Images
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