User:Michael Stauch/sandbox

Article Evaluation: Young Boys Inc.
Title would be better as "Young Boys, Inc."

Poor grammar in the second paragraph of introduction.

Sources: References are minimal (two sources, one an encyclopedia, newspaper source is a dead link); sparse references throughout; article could be considered original research.

Relevance: Stuff about Boston is somewhat tangential

Viewpoints: Article raises the matter of knowledge and representation: if this is a topic few people study, then Wikipedia's opposition to original research makes it difficult to include subjects like this.

Talk page: Repeats some of same issues I've noted about limitations of sources; rated "start class" in WikiProjects it's a part of