User:Michaelajoyce15/User:Michaelajoyce15/sandbox/Senceia Peer Review

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Michaelajoyce15


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The whole page talks about Katy Feeney. The content of the whole page all related to Katy Feeney that starts with a brief introduction of her. It is up-to-dates and the tone of whole is neutral without bias or any under/over-presented. There are 7 reliable sources that are newest in 2022. The whole structure is clear and concise, but there could be more detail information of her from she born to the death as different small headings. There are only three sections, which are all related to the life after she becoming Major League Baseball executive. I think it could talk about her whole lifetime story from her born to her death. The death of Katy Feeney could be more specific rather than she "suddenly died". If there is an image of Katy Feeney could help audience to understand more on her. The article is complete, but it could be more complete by adding something when she was young. After she becoming famous, the article could also mentioned or be in detail that why she continues to affect generations of women in baseball.