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Grammar and Spelling Changes To Original Text for Seoul Station
"Released on August 18, 2016, the film stars Ryu Seung-ryong, Shim Eun-kyung [,]and Lee Joon in the lead roles."

"Taking place in [In] and around Seoul station, a young runaway woman must try to survive in a world that sees her as disposable."

"Just as he is about to be reunited [reunite] with her, a zombie epidemic breaks out in Seoul."

"Hye-sun escapes with a few survivors into a police station and becomes trapped by a group of zombies within a jail cell, only to realize a surviving policeman in the cell with them has been bitten [a zombie bit a surviving policeman in the cell with them]. "

Meanwhile, Hye-sun's father, Suk-gyu, approaches Ki-woong before interrogating him for his daughter's location. The two go to Hye-sun's home, only to find that the landlady had become a zombie.

" Help [Reinforcements] arrives and draws the infected away, allowing Hye-sun and an old[er] man to escape the cell and get into an ambulance."

"The old[er] man panics when he realizes they are en route to the hospital, where many reports of bite wounds appear to be coming in."

"Hye-sun and the old[er] man flee [into the station] through the subway [tunnels]."

"Outside the station [Hoehyeon Station], Ki-[w]oong calls Hye-sun[,] but their conversation alerts the infected."

"The two are saved, only to realize they are placed in a quarantine by riot police."

"After a speech on his poor position in society, the old[er] man tries to lead a revolt."

"Hye-[s]un is able to escape[s], but is scratched on her foot by a zombie."

"When Ki-woong and Hye-sun are reunited, she reveals that Suk-gyu is not her father but rather her previous pimp."

"As an argument erupts, Ki-woong tries to attack Suk-gyu with a knife but is [gets] killed instead."

"Hye-sun tries to flee[,] but Suk-gyu subdues her on a bed."

As he prepares to rape her, she loses consciousness. As Suk-gyu frantically applies CPR, he spots the scratch on Hye-sun's foot and realizes that she is infected. As Hye-sun reanimates and kills Suk-gyu, the camera zooms past a dead Ki-woong and the infected overrunning the quarantine.

"Clarence Tsui of The Hollywood Reporter called the film "a simple, thrilling ride through a fiend-infested world." The review aggregator website Rotten Tomatoes [Rotten Tomatoes review aggregator website] reported that 100% of critics have [had] given the film a positive review based on 15 reviews, with an average rating of 7.12/10."

"American distributor Film[R]ise released the DVD and Blu-ray versions of Seoul Station on July 25, 2017. The animated film is also available to stream on Amazon Prime Video, Tubi, Apple TV[,] and Shudder."

Adding to the Plot of Seoul Station
[Insert at the beginning]

A homeless man walks around the Seoul Station area with his hand covering a bloody on his neck. A college student wants to help him, but the man's stench causes him to back out. The man continues to wander until he reaches Seoul Station and lays down. A fellow squatter sits next to him chanting about his anger when he notices the blood. The friend goes to a local shelter to beg them to take the man in, but the other residents refuse to leave and even intimidates the friend not to bring the man here. The friend tries to get the station guard for help, but the guard refuses and tells him to leave. He then goes to a pharmacy to buy some painkillers and an energy drink, but the man is no longer alive when he returns to the station. The friend goes to the police station to inform them about his friend's death and release his anger. The officers follow him to his friend, but the man is gone. All that's left is a small pool of blood. The friend goes to search for the man and finds him in an alley eating a body.

[Insert after describing Ki-woong and their money problems]

Ki-woong yells at her for not agreeing to prostitute and that he is the one who saved her after she fled from the brothel. He threatens her not to return home if she disagrees with this arrangement.

[Insert after the landlady has become a zombie]

Suk-gyu runs into the apartment and closes the door, but Ki-woong is curious and opens the door to see what has happened. The zombie landlady charges and attacks Ki-woong. Suk-gyu bashes the landlady in the head with the toilet tank cover until she stops moving. They both stand there in shock when they hear noises coming from the hallway. The bitten rentee sees them and charges at them. They both hide in the bathroom and lock the door.

[Insert after the officer bites another survivor]

Back at the apartment, Sun-gyu and Ki-woong escapes through the bathroom window and climbs the pipe up to the roof. Sun-gyu devises a plan with Ki-woong to get the zombies' attention and run down the alley while he goes down to get the car and drives out to the main road to meet up with Ki-woong. They drive away in shock, but focuses on finding to Hye-sun.

[Insert after the older man and Hye-sun gets in the ambulance]

The ambulance crew seems oblivious to what is happening to the infected. Hye-sun calls Ki-woong that she is heading to the hospital and to meet her there.

[Insert after the older man and Hye-sun goes into the subway tunnels]

Meanwhile, Suk-gyu and Ki-woong make their way to the hospital. Sun-gyu tells him to stay in the car. He makes his way to the emergency room and finds it a mess with no people around. As he makes his way down the corridor, he finds the infected roaming everywhere. At the car, a zombie tries to get to Ki-woong, but Suk-gyu smashes the zombie with an IV pole. They drive away, continuing their search for Hye-sun.

[Insert after the call alerted the infected]

Hye-sun and the older man run as fast as they can to get away from the infected. A group of people waves to them, and they run up the makeshift barricade while the other survivors fight off the infected.

[Insert after insurrection]

Suk-gyu and Ki-woong tries to persuade the police to let them through, but they refused. The military arrived to the scene and learns from the officer that the military has full command of the situation.

[Insert before the survivor group succumbs to the infected]

A survivor fighting on the makeshift barricade gets bitten as he is fighting the infected. He begs the other survivors to not through him over the wall and they agreed to it. The survivors can no longer hold down the barricade as hundreds of infected runs towards their direction.

[Insert after Hye-sun reveals Suk-gyu as her previous pimp]

Suk-gyu has been searching for her because she has yet to pay him back the money she borrowed.

Adding to Reception of Seoul Station
James Marsh of South China Morning Post gave a rating of 3/5. He commented that the film addresses South Korea's societal issues, including prostitution and homelessness.

Gwilym Mumford of The Guardian also gave the film a 3/5 rating. He stated that this film is different from its sequel, Train to Busan because it focuses on the "desperate souls trapped in life's margins."

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