User:Michelle Goldberg/sandbox

Biography

 * So far, the only thing that this article contains is a short biography but there are no subsections of it. So, right now everything is all together when it could be organized more clearly. Here are 2 headings I think would be helpful when organizing the biography section: Early Life and Eduction.


 * In the Early Life section, we should include where he grew up, went to high school, and what his parents occupations were.


 * In the Education section, we should include where he went to college, what he studied, why he chose his line of work, and other things that he did in college. I also think we should mention that he was in a band and transition from that into why he chose a different career path.

Career

 * Currently there is a lot of information about his career but it does't go that much into detail. I think we should focus on 2 or 3 cases that he had a major impact on and focus on his involvement with the FBI and BAU. Here are the most famous cases that he was involved with: the JonBenet Ramsey murder, the conviction of Christopher Coleman for strangling his wife and children, and helping the NY State Police Intelligence Division in investigating documents that threatened Governor Cuomo and his daughter. These are the cases that we should focus on and we should include Leonard's involvement with them.