User:Michellevp16/Positive psychology/AngelOffley Peer Review

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Michellevp16
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Michellevp16/Positive psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Positive psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead

Your lead section is off to a good start in defining the topic concisely and accurately! It's great that you emphasized the scientific basis of positive psychology, distinguishing it from non-scientific pop psychology. The proposed change to the definition of positive psychology is also very clear and understanding. I would ensure that the lead summarizes the main sections of the article, like optimal human functioning, the humanistic movement, and the emphasis on happiness and well-being!

Content and Sources/References

The content you’ve added is definitely relevant and helps clarify the scientific nature of positive psychology. Your suggestions to simplify the wording and add more information where needed are spot on! Of course, make sure that every change is backed by reliable sources, and double-check that all current references are accurate and up-to-date. If you do decide to add new information or figures, make sure they are well-researched and properly cited.

Tone and Balance

You've maintained a neutral tone, which is great! Just keep an eye out for any biased language, especially when discussing the distinction between scientific positive psychology and pop psychology. Otherwise, everything looks great there!

Organization

The draft is clear and organized, but I think there may be room for improvement in conciseness. Your proposed changes are really good already, but make sure to follow through on simplifying complex wording. Also, I would ensure that each section of the article flows logically and covers all the necessary points.

Images and Media

Images are definitely optional but adding some could really enhance the article and make it more engaging.