User:Michellevp16/Positive psychology/MaddiMcg Peer Review

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Michellevp16
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Positive psychology
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job. Very well constructed and heavily detailed. Proposed draft changes were laid out to show the exact section of article being evaluated and the proposed draft change of that portion. The content of the draft remains neutral in tone and balance and does not show any bias. Some parts of the draft did not flow together and were a little difficult to follow, however the last paragraph provided a easy to understand description of the article's major section's and topic.