User:Michellevp16/Positive psychology/Makylam18 Peer Review

General info
Michelle - @Michellevp16
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Michellevp16/Positive psychology

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

 * Positive psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft in the sandbox was overall good and I feel that the draft is going in a good direction. The rephrasing of the definition of positive psychology was good and was worded very well. The content added to the article is relevant to the topic and adds in a positive way. There are no references, I would suggest adding references to the bibliography that add to your article and help prove the reliability of the information being read. Overall the tone of the article is very neutral. I believe that the thoughts that you mentioned on how you would like to proceed in editing will add to the article in a good way, making it more informative and concise.