User:Michy099/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title:Jaqueline Cochran
 * Article Evaluation:According to this articles talk page, it is ranked as a C, I can see why as it is very wordy, and tends to be too descriptive in the awards section of this article. As I read through the article, there are also claims that must be accompanied by sources, The article also has a "postwar" section, implying that there should be a "prewar/during war" section, making the organization of this article somewhat difficult to follow.
 * Sources:Erisman, Fred. “Epilogue: Requiem for the Aviation Age.” In Their Own Words: Forgotten Women Pilots of Early Aviation, Purdue University Press, 2021, pp. 140–56. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctv15pjxwd.11 . Accessed 20 June 2024.:This source provides information Jaqueline Cochran, and her connections in the political world that allowed her to achieve such awards/achievements.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Dora Dougherty Strother
 * Article Evaluation:A very well organized article, not too wordy, and has just enough information of the women pilot. Most of the information provided is general, and not too detailed to the extent of derailing the desired information of Dora, such as mentioning her records, but not providing all of its extensive information.
 * Sources:I believe this article can be improved by providing maybe one more photo of Dora Doughtery in action, more towards the end of the article to accompany the Legacy subheading, photos such as the one here: Would need to acquire image beforehand. :

Option 3

 * Article title:Betty Tackaberry Blake
 * Article Evaluation:A very brief article that could definitely use some more subheadings such as "legacy" or "pre-war' information that would shape this article with more information of who she was.
 * Sources:There are various different ways to say this womens name, so using this source would provide another name to call Betty, which should be provided in the title of this article. This source also provides more information on her air force career.

Option 4
An incredibly brief article on Teresa James which could use some more organization on her pre war/post war life, as well as her personal life. This article could use more insight on the life James lived, and the interactions of herself and the people she surrounded herself with such as the WASPS.
 * Article title
 * Teresa James
 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title:Nancy Harkness Love
 * Article Evaluation:A well organized and executed article as it provides information on her personal and aviation career. However, more can be added to her personal life.
 * Sources:This article could use some more personal information of Love and her relationship with others such as her husband, and other achievements ,