User:Midnightrain0528/Rhodopsin/Nmneuro Peer Review

Please read on below to see my peer review! Thanks!

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Midnightrain0528


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Midnightrain0528/Rhodopsin


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rhodopsin

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! Great article choice! I believe that the rhosopsin protein is an important topic within biochemistry and medicine that also incorporates other big topics within biochemistry, like G protein coupled signaling, so it is great that you decided to contribute more information for this topic.


 * Lead: Although your contribution is a smaller detail that should not be widely represented in the lead section, it is good that you chose to mention G protein signaling in your Structure section contribution because that connects back to the information in the lead.
 * Content: Information about how the density of rhodopsin is certainly relevant to the structure. It is also great how you provided nuanced information about the impact of high density, which shows that you did not take a biased perspective on the topic. A piece of feedback that would be helpful is inclusion of information or explicitly stating what the native membrane for rhodopsin is because that would help a general Wikipedia reader better understand the context for your contribution. Additionally, while I find that the information about the origin of the word is interesting, I am not entirely sure whether the information is relevant to understanding the topic.
 * Tone and Balance: Your tone is professional! The structure of rhodopsin is essential to understanding anything else about it, such as its phototransduction and diseases, so adding information to this section balances the importance of each topic covered on the page.
 * Sources and References: Your cited source appears to be recent and reliable as a 2019 scientific journal article published in a reputable journal.
 * Organization: I believe that your contributions were added to the correct sections. The information about the origin of the word is most appropriate in the "Names" section, whereas the information about the impact of high density belongs in "Structure." One could argue, however, that the information about the high density belongs under the "Phototransduction" section because it is relevant to how the rhodopsin carries out its signaling function.

Overall, great work and nice choice of information! ~ Nmneuro