User:MightyFiveEleven/Lake Moeris/Tson21 Peer Review

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MightyFiveEleven
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The lead section of this article provides satisfactory insight into what the topic of the article pertains to. Providing an accurate intention as to the properties and relevance of Lake Moeris. From a basic introduction to the topic, the lead of the paper continues well into the historic-cultural significance of the lake. Reflecting on the lakes agricultural importance throughout Egyptian history as well as providing evidence to how the lake has changed over the years and the environmental challenges that have been a cause of the man implemented changes. Overall, the lead to this paper is well executed and lays out the foundation of the article well. After viewing the rest of the article, it is safe to concur the led presents the information needed to go into more specific historical information pertaining to the main lesson of the article.

The article is clear on the topic it is discussing, presenting a decent flow form aspect to aspect regarding Lake Moeris. Providing information strictly about the ancient lake itself and the changes it has undergone over the years. The order in which the article is set up works well for providing a clear linear passage of context.

The article maintains a focus on information both good and bad pertaining to Lake Moeris. That being said, the article fixates largely on the physical attributes of the lake itself and its physical history. Information regarding its role in ancient Egyptian ways of life seem more neglected, I am unfamiliar with the topic, therefore I am not aware if information about Lake Moeris's relationship to ancient Egyptian culture or ways of lives has nay more depth then what is presented. This being said the article does an incredible job on addressing the creation of the lake as well as the sheer and insane changes that this body of water had undergone over the centuries.

The bulk of information regarding lake Moeris in this Wikipedia article primarily focuses on the physical changes the ancient lake has seen over the years, providing historical insights into how mans involvement has contributed towards the growth and decline of the lake over the course of Egyptian history. Giving subtle glimpse's into the role and relationship Lake Moeris held with both ancient and modern Egyptians alike.

The article maintains a neutral stance on the subject of Lake Moeris, strictly providing factual information pertaining to Lake Moeris, absent of any biases and unneutral.

The article appears to supply proper support and sources for the information presented. Avoiding instances of misinformation, and utilizing reliable sources for the information listed. All of this apparent while also avoiding any instance of information that requires additional source's to support the claims made.