User:MiguelMercado5/U visa/Anyssa.pat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MiguelMercado5


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MiguelMercado5/U_visa?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * U visa

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The voice in which the draft is suitable for Wikipedia article writing, for the key messages that are being put across are clear and concise. The content added and being addressed is neutral and flows from the already published paragraph to the to-be-added draft. The citations are very up-to-date and trustworthy, making the information and resources trustworthy and dependable. The information seem to flow between sections and paragraphs, and ties nicely into the contents of the article. Based on the content being added into the article, an image doesn't seem quite necessary to further enhance the message, for the description already does so.