User:Mikade harvey/Amateur wrestling/JamarK0709 Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mikade%20harvey/Amateur_wrestling?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Amateur wrestling

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Peer Review: Critique of Amateur Wrestling Article

Lead:

- The introduction gives a quick rundown of amateur wrestling at Olympic, collegiate, and scholastic levels. It introduces the international styles and the overseeing organization. However, it could be spiced up a bit with more engaging language to better capture the article's essence.

Content:

- The article delves into various facets of amateur wrestling, including scoring, periods, victory conditions, illegal moves, and equipment. The information seems relevant and recent.

- It might be cool to add some backstory or cultural context to amateur wrestling, providing a broader perspective for readers.

Tone and Balance:

- The tone maintains a neutral stance, presenting facts without apparent bias.

- The content is balanced, covering different aspects of amateur wrestling without leaning toward a particular viewpoint.

Sources and References

- The absence of citations to reliable sources makes it a bit tricky to fact-check. Adding references to recognized wrestling organizations, rulebooks, or reputable sports websites would be beneficial.

Organization:

- The content is logically organized into sections, making it easy to follow. Subheadings could be introduced to break down sections further and enhance clarity.

- While the writing is clear and concise, there are a few grammatical hiccups that need fixing.

Images and Media:

- Images are present, and presents wrestling's visual nature, including some visuals like images or diagrams improves understanding.

Overall Impressions:

- The added content elevates the article by providing detailed information on amateur wrestling.

- The strengths lie in the thorough overview, relevant details, and a clear structure.