User:Mikaela20/Oak St./Jerrial Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mikaela20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mikaela20/Oak St.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead section is decent but could be better.
 * The phrase "booming with life" sounds kind of biased.
 * I think maybe you should include a little more information on the location.
 * Your sentences are very simple so I think you should find a way to make them more complex.
 * You should link some of the words in your article to other articles on Wikipedia.
 * There are no sources or citations so you should work on those.
 * Overall, this is a great start to your article!