User:Mikaela bauer/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Harry Styles

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I choose this article because it is someone that means a lot to me and who I love very much. I've seen him in concerts and know a lot about him so wanted to see if there was anything I didn't know. When first clicking on the article I realized his page was longer than other celebrities and it made me realize how much he actually does and how successful he really is. I always loved the images. The article is laid out well.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead includes a good introductory sentence stating exactly what Harry does and who he is. The lead is concise. The article splits up his different achievements, one is about one direction, another is about his first solo album and movie dunkirk and the other is fine line and further acting roles. The content for this article is very detailed and up to date. I like the way they brought up his philanthropy and advocacy because he gives back a lot and his whole brand is treating people with kindness. The article is missing some current information Harry is going to be in 2 upcoming movies Mr. policeman and Don't worry darling they didn't mention a lot about it. The article is neutral showing Harry's accomplishments and background about his life. A fan might of wrote some of it and added information that was important. The article will persuade people to like Harry because it shows what an amazing talented person he is. The article has a bunch of sources it goes up to 220. The sources are current and accurate. I clicked on a few links and all of them worked. A lot of the articles were from trustable cites like the rolling stone, billboard, the independent. The article is well written and easy to read. The breakup of the article really explained a lot about who he is and what he's accomplished. The article did a good job in choosing picture. It show's Harry during his different eras growing up. I liked how they used a picture of him holding the LGBTQ+ flag showing how he supports everyone and is a good person. The images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations. I may be biased because I am a big fan of Harry but the article did a great job showing who Harry really is. The strengths of the article is all the information and the links. There are so many different articles listed you can learn so much about him. The weakness of the article is not being up to date now. He has a nail polish line called pleasing and that was mentioned but it didn't go into detail about it.