User:Mikaelaswildlife/Primate Reintroduction/ValB13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mikaelaswildlife


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mikaelaswildlife/Primate_Reintroduction?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mikaelaswildlife/Primate_Reintroduction?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really like the way that you formatted the article. You also have a lot of very good sources. I think adding a photo of a primate, either in a rehab center or pet trade or of a species you reference in the text would add visual interest to your article. Although you mention it in the beginning, adding a paragraph at the end about what the benefits to the ecosystem are once the primates have been reintroduced would tie the article nicely together. I like that you put in the risk and challenges section to give a more nuanced perspective to the issues associated with primate reintroduction.