User:Mikamek1/1995 strikes in France/KarthikVetri Peer Review

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Mikamek1
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 * 1995 strikes in France

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes provided places the French strikes within the broader context of increased competitive pressures on workers across developed nations in the late 20th century. It suggests governments were indirectly supporting businesses through subsidies, leading companies to pass costs/pressures onto employees.

By noting this "chain reaction" was observed in other countries like Belgium and the Netherlands, it frames the French strikes as one manifestation of transnational labor tensions, rather than an isolated domestic issue. This provides useful background for understanding the strikes as part of wider social/economic forces impacting multiple Western societies at that time.

It gives readers more insight into why these types of labor actions were occurring in France and other regions in parallel, as opposed to being a unique problem confined to one place. So it expands the scope and analytical framework provided about these historical events.