User:MikeSadler11/CHON/Plutooprojector Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing Michael Sadler's work (MikeSadler11).
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think your wikipedia page provides a well-rounded foundation and CHONPS! It provides a lot of information that another reader would not have known.

1. I think for your importance for CHONPS, you could provide examples of its applications aka Astrobiology (life beyond earth as well?)

2. In CHNOPS on Other Planets, you could expand on the methods used for remote sensing and the significance of detecting CHNOPS elements on other planets and moons.

3. For Other Elements Important to Life, you could emphasize that while CHNOPS are essential, other elements play crucial roles in biological processes too. You could provide brief explanations for the role of each mentioned element (Fe, Mo, Mg, Zn) in a very accessible way?